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Stargazer Eyes

Stargazer Eyes

Painting Painting \ Figure | 07/21/07 @422 | christwriter | Comments critiques (9) | Views views (691)


Stargazer Eyes
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It started out as a simple excercise to see if I could use color and composision to draw the viewer's attention to a single spot immediately, then lead them around the picture and back. I have no idea if I accomplished it. I also tried to make the black outline work, and have no idea if I accomplished THAT, either.

And of course, since this is me we're talking about, it got out of hand rather quickly. So. Much. Detail.

This was also the first image I made where the focus was on how it would look on a wall, and not how it would look on a monitor. There's a metric ton of detail and texture work I had to put into it to get it to look good at the print level. Most of that was subtle stuff. Check the larger view, as it comes through a bit better.

Technical stuff: Photoshop+wacom tablet, as well as a DAZ|Studio render as a reference for the face. I will admit I did wind up having to trace the outline for the face. Took about a week, and was pure fun.

HEAVY critiques and feedback is much desired. This was an exparament with composision and color, and I'd like to know how close I got to my goal.

To those of you inclined to critique, what was the first thing your eyes were drawn to in the picture? That'll let me know how close I came.
 
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Avatar Diane

 07/21/07 @453

Nice work! I really like her eyes though I think that her right eye is too wide. The colours are beautiful, nice composition :)
She reminds me of my Poison Ivy ^^
The chains could be thinner, they actually look too heavy to be easily worn without hurting the eyelid.
Nice work overall!
+9/10
 
christwriter

 07/21/07 @473

Thank you.

...damn. You're right about the eye. I also just now noticed her forehead's a little too small.

CW
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 07/21/07 @786

Nice composition!
Nice colors :)
 
Avatar Daykan

 07/21/07 @817

Beautiful!!! Great work!
 
Avatar tomato04

 07/21/07 @902

the colors and the way you painted it are perfect! the only thing that bothers me is, like you and diane have mentioned, the proportions of the face ;) otherwise it looks great!
 
Avatar Madanapale

 07/23/07 @175

Beautiful colors!
Carlos
 
Avatar enthralled

 07/23/07 @258

Very interesting color harmony.
I really like the bird and the flow of the hair.
I think the face is a little flat, maybe you should give more depth to create a better illusion of form.
The face will look much better if you work on it just a little more.
Please keep sharing more of your great artwork! (thumbup)
 
Avatar blackshad

 07/23/07 @676

excellent work
first i looked at the girl, then the flower in the bottom left
colors are great, but i think the face isn't perfect even if its nice, hard to say why thought, im a photographer not a painter :)
keep it up :) +8
 
Avatar ADY

 10/11/07 @320

Excellent! +9
 
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